http://almahir.com/2006/07/15/week-12-shot05-v2-shot06-v1-shot07-v1-playblasts/ Animation. Sequential Art. Sketches. Visual Storytelling. E-mail me: ahmad@almahir.com. Tue, 06 Jan 2009 03:56:13 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 http://almahir.com/2006/07/15/week-12-shot05-v2-shot06-v1-shot07-v1-playblasts/comment-page-1/#comment-28 Ahmad Al-Mahir Tue, 25 Jul 2006 11:04:20 +0000 http://almahir.com/wordpress/2006/07/15/week-12-shot05-v2-shot06-v1-shot07-v1-playblasts/#comment-28 Thanx for the input Jerry. I get what you mean by too much going on. I\'ve made Mr. Knox\'s movements be a bit more subtle and I\'m considering adjusting the timing of his actions (maybe add in longer pauses) to help reduce the \'chaos\'. I\'ll have to see if the duration of the shot/film allows for it. The framing of the shot recurs throughout the film which is intended but I\'ll consider adding in some reaction shots in between. There\'s a fine balance between making changes/refinements and moving on sometimes :( Still, your feedback is much appreciated! Take a look at my latest update and tell me what you think. Thanx for the input Jerry. I get what you mean by too much going on. I\’ve made Mr. Knox\’s movements be a bit more subtle and I\’m considering adjusting the timing of his actions (maybe add in longer pauses) to help reduce the \’chaos\’. I\’ll have to see if the duration of the shot/film allows for it. The framing of the shot recurs throughout the film which is intended but I\’ll consider adding in some reaction shots in between.
There\’s a fine balance between making changes/refinements and moving on sometimes Still, your feedback is much appreciated! Take a look at my latest update and tell me what you think.

]]> http://almahir.com/2006/07/15/week-12-shot05-v2-shot06-v1-shot07-v1-playblasts/comment-page-1/#comment-27 Jerry Mon, 24 Jul 2006 13:17:25 +0000 http://almahir.com/wordpress/2006/07/15/week-12-shot05-v2-shot06-v1-shot07-v1-playblasts/#comment-27 looks like there is too much going on in terms of animation in this shot. Give the audience some direction of where to look. Am I supposed to be looking at the boy or the man sliding along the bench? Changing the framing could help establish this. This looks like a heafty amount of work - way to go on getting this far! looks like there is too much going on in terms of animation in this shot. Give the audience some direction of where to look. Am I supposed to be looking at the boy or the man sliding along the bench? Changing the framing could help establish this. This looks like a heafty amount of work - way to go on getting this far!

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